HOT DAMN! They must have had some kinda serious play session going on to get that worked up! It didn't seem like any kind of organized, planned out scene, though, just sort of like Ewan was poking around trying out different things with Eric. Felt like Ewan was on a massive power trip there, eh? Jesus. At least he recognized his limits, though. Good job there for that, Ewan, but I felt bad for the both of them in the end. =/ Seems to me like it's not a good idea for them to switch in this relationship until Ewan gets a bit steadier in the role.

You wrote this very convincingly; it seemed quite realistic, and the pacing and descriptions of their thoughts, reactions, and emotions were spot-on. Really believable. Nicely done. :)