oooo I love! I liked the way that it wasn't all just smut- as much as we all love and crave smut!- but there was also love and fluff in there too. And shyness and hesitation instead of "FUCK ME!" after the first line, which so often happens =D I loved the line:

"Then let me see you fall apart... I will be here to pick up the pieces," he growled softly.

That was... just amazing. Who WOULDN'T want someone to say that to them? lol

Really good job =D