Ficlet: Naughty (1/1)

[salixbabylon]

Title/Prompt: "Naughty" from the 28-fics-meme (30 actually)
Pairing: Orlando/Eric for bloominbabylon
Author: salixbabylon
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 300
Disclaimer: Complete fiction. I am implying nothing about the real sexual preferences of the actors herein. Absolutely no disrespect is meant to them.



"Naughty," Eric said, hand crashing down on Orlando's upturned bum.

Orlando moaned and arched his back, pushing his arse up higher.

"Very naughty," Eric affirmed, swinging his arm for another spank. "You greedy little slut."

"I'm sorry."

He sounded sincere, Eric decided, but not repentant.

"Not sorry enough," Eric said in a light tone. "Didn't you ever learn to share?"

"I didn't know you wanted more," Orlando whined. He moved and twisted like he was struggling but Eric knew better. He gripped his hand harder around the back of Orlando's neck and got a deep groan in response. Orlando arched his back again, wordlessly begging.

Eric wanted words.

"Of course I wanted some; I wouldn't have bought them otherwise." Two rapid smacks followed Eric's words.

"I thought you'd already had some," Orlando gasped, spreading his thighs further apart. Heat radiated from his arse, back glistening with sweat that was more from arousal than from the spanking. His hands clenched around the headboard, face buried in the bedding. His hole clenched and relaxed as Eric traced it with a fingertip.

"I should leave you here to think about what you've done," Eric threatened as he moved his hand away.

That broke him.

"No! I'm sorry! I won't eat all the blueberries again, I promise!" He was definitely repentant now. "Please, Eric, stay. Spank me, fuck me, anything, please!"

Eric rubbed his hand across the needy arse.

"Please?"

The loud smack of hand hitting an already red cheek filled the silence.

"If you think you've learned your lesson..."

"Oh, I do! I have. Yes, yes, ooooh yes," Orlando's voice cracked as two fingers slid in.

Eric smiled. The only thing better than fresh blueberries was punishing a greedy Orli. He didn't mind at all that he never got any of the berries.

~end~

Comments

[astrojen.livejournal.com]

Heeheehee....naughty Orli. But I think he enjoyed the punishment as much as he enjoyed eating all the blueberries. Greedy boy. ;)

Jen ;->

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

I think you're right - it's a win-win situation for Orlando. ;)

Not too bad for Eric, though.

[bloominbabylon.livejournal.com]

*squee*

a little bit of everything that makes life wonderful! especialy fingering yay!

*kisses you all over*

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Hehehehe! I'm thrilled that you liked it! :)

[heartofslash.livejournal.com]

*has strange and inexplicable craving for blueberries*

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*has typical and usual craving for Eric's hands*

:)

[riley442.livejournal.com]

lol! That was so hot, yet so cute at the same time! Why do I get the feeling Orlando intentinally ate all the blueberries hoping he would get punished?? ;)

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

I know, woudn't you do the same thing? I think I would. :)

I'm glad you liked it it - thanks for commenting!

[orli-gasm.livejournal.com]

OMG! My mouth is watering and my brain is fried! What a delicious treat! What a yummy picture you painted! It has given me happy panties, flaming panites but they were happy before they burst into flames!

I love your naughty!

THANK YOU!!!!

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*passes you some iced tea*

*hoses down the flaming panties*

Glad you liked it! :)

[andolinn.livejournal.com]

OMG! Wicked. You are just wicked! *smooshes you*

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Wicked in a way that's likely to get me spanked? Because I could go for that. :)

[andolinn.livejournal.com]

Oh, is that what you're going for? Well, blueberries wouldn't do it. Drinking all the coffee in the morning probably would...

[jasmasson.livejournal.com]

Whoa. HOT. *loves*

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

:) Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[lozateazer.livejournal.com]

Those first few lines just did a huge amount of damage to my stomach--it did a happy dance. Mmmmmm... Happy dancing uterus bwahaha

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Hehehehe! So is it Eric's huge hand crashing down or Orlando begging for more that gets you going? ;)

[lozateazer.livejournal.com]

Apparently so!

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

The only thing better than fresh blueberries was punishing a greedy Orli.

Glad he felt able to share the moment!!!

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

No kidding! I love when it feels like a little peek in through the window at what the boys are getting up to. ;)

Naughty

[jackieville.livejournal.com]

Eric spanking Orli is so hot! Our boy should be naughty more often! *giggles*

Re: Naughty

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

I bet Orli is naughty for Eric all the time. Who wouldn't want to be spanked by those huge hands...

*rowr*