beta please?
Aug. 1st, 2003 12:58 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
salixbabylonFinally finished the first draft of "Card Games" for the SS FQF! Yae! Finally!
But: BLECH! The ending just got SO SAPPY. Yuck. They were being all nice and snarky and just having a friendly shag and now they're all MUSHY. Afterglow, I tell you - it melts the muses' brains.
And the sex scene is having a massive "the other man" problem. Blarg.
Anyone have time for a quick-job beta? I like to try and get two different perspectives, and I'm especially feeling uncertain about this one since it's been so long since I've written anything explicit.
Details: Severus/Remus, NC17, 4218 words (10 pages), and since the fest deadline is August 10th, I need it back by the 8th at the latest.
Anyone?
But: BLECH! The ending just got SO SAPPY. Yuck. They were being all nice and snarky and just having a friendly shag and now they're all MUSHY. Afterglow, I tell you - it melts the muses' brains.
And the sex scene is having a massive "the other man" problem. Blarg.
Anyone have time for a quick-job beta? I like to try and get two different perspectives, and I'm especially feeling uncertain about this one since it's been so long since I've written anything explicit.
Details: Severus/Remus, NC17, 4218 words (10 pages), and since the fest deadline is August 10th, I need it back by the 8th at the latest.
Anyone?
