FIC: Cold (EM/EB, R-ish), for 50kinkyways

[salixbabylon]

Title: Cold
Author: salixbabylon
Fandom: RPS
Characters: Ewan McGregor/Eric Bana
Prompt: 9. Ice
Word Count: 424
Rating: R
Author's Notes: Ice cubes aren't kinky at all. Right?



Cold

Ewan lies face down on the bed, wrists bound together, stretched over his head. His legs are spread apart, tethered to each corner.

And an ice cube rests on the smooth curve of his back, melting.

Slowly.

An ice cube is fucking cold.

More so than you would think unless you, too, were immobile with one melting somewhere on your naked body.

It's so cold it hurts, and every so often when his skin starts to go numb, Eric moves it around. Strokes it around his back, up his shoulders, down and over the curve of his arse.

But mostly, he leaves it alone, lets it stay, melting, until a puddle grows, icy rivulets sometimes overflowing, running down Ewan's sides, making him gasp at the unexpected bite of the cold water.

Fucking finally, the ice cube must be thoroughly melted because Eric puts one warm hand at the back of Ewan's neck to hold him still and starts lapping up the water with his tongue, drinking it from Ewan's body. The contrast, the heat of Eric's mouth after the biting cold of the ice, makes Ewan moan and twist, rubbing his cock against the mattress. He's been hard since the wrist cuffs went on, and that feels like hours ago, and he was good, so good, holding still, and now he wants his reward, damnit, he says.

Eric laughs at him.

But undoes the restraints at his ankles and slowly rolls him over.

And then gets another piece of ice and trails it in slick, shocking strokes up and down Ewan's cock, going back and forth between licking him with his warm tongue and freezing him with the ice.

Finally when Ewan can't take any more, pleading "Come fucking on, Eric," he takes Ewan's cock all the way into his mouth.

Bliss.

But no.

Eric's not done with him yet, because in Eric's mouth there is also a bit of ice, and now Eric's mouth is wet and cold.

It's the weirdest blowjob Ewan's ever had and it's wrong because mouths are supposed to be hot, but it's enough, it's all right, it's good, no it's fucking wonderful because Eric's finally really sucking him and Ewan's fucking finally coming down his throat with a lusty shout.

All this because he said he didn't think ice was particularly kinky.

When he comes down the bed has cold wet spots everywhere and Ewan feels strangely unsettled, satiated but still reeling from how bloody cold Eric's mouth felt, and how odd it all was.

Eric's warm, though

~end~

Comments

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*rubs ice all over*

Don't want to cause any tissue damage there. ;)

[heartofslash.livejournal.com]

I didn't think ice would necessarily be particularly kinky either.

Now I'm going to have trouble in RL.

Nice lady behind counter: Would you like ice with that?

Me: Uuuuuuunnnnnggggghhhhh.

Nice lady behing counter: I beg your pardon, ma'am?

Me: Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Heheheheheh!

"Want any Ewan with that? Perhaps some Eric?"

*shivers with you*

[andolinn.livejournal.com]

Meep! Now that was ice done right. Very hot, I mean cold, I mean... You get the picture.

I'm really laughing here because someone was prodding me with a sharp stick asking me to do ice and there's no way in hell I could have come up with anything this good. I'm sending her over right now.

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Yay, I'm glad you liked it! Icy wetness - *lick*

Honestly, I wasn't sure I could do it. Like Ewan, ice just didn't seem kinky to me. Eric sure made it that way, though. ;)

Thanks for the rec!

[andolinn.livejournal.com]

Well, I imagine that writing something that is difficult is how you grow as a writer. Eric was pretty naughty in this one. *growl*

For myself, I'm just thrilled to know there is someone alive out there - my entire flist has fallen silent and I'm wondering if they've been kidnapped by aliens or just decided not to speak to me! Sheesh.

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*checks around* No, I think they removed the probe after they returned me... Si I'm back, at least. ;)

Maybe it's the no-comments-emails problem, since I see that that has come back. :P

[andolinn.livejournal.com]

Oh, really?! Well that might explain things. Because when I'm looking at my inbox and I've received four e-mails since Sunday, I really wonder. *sigh*

[alliwantisanelf.livejournal.com]

Damn, that's hot. It's not even my normal pairing, but you know I have to read it when you write it because it's always SO DAMNED HOT.

And you didn't disappoint me. Wonderful!

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Yay! Another convert!

Seriously, though, I'm flattered that you'd read outside your norm for me and heartofslash. I've never seen this pairing before (although there might be some in the BHD world), and since I'm Ewan-obsessed, I'm trying to drum up interest in it.

Glad you liked - lots more to come as work through the whole kinky 50. :)

[astrojen.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmm, nice.

Btw...got your card yesterday, Sal. How fitting that it should arrive on my brthday. :)

Jen ;->

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Glad you liked. :)

Just yesterday??? Damn, I mailed them all on December 5th! :P Glad you got it, though, and happy belated birthday! *hugs*

[p1nkfish.livejournal.com]

No one can write Ewan McGregor/Eric Bana as well as you do, I love this so much. Would it be ok if I added you as a friend?

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Awww... *blush* I couldn't do it without my partner in sin heartofslash, though.

Thank you so much for the praise - of course you can friend me! :)

[gattodoro.livejournal.com]

Oooh, Nice. Reader wanders off to obsess about the exact ambient temperature of Eric's mouth...and his ass...and all of him in fact! Anyone know where you can get centre-piece ice statues modelled on body parts? (It would have to be a damn big table to accommodate a whole Eric)

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

exact temperature = smokin' hot!

I bet an ice sculpture would be dangerous - just think of all the fangirls trying to lick it. ;)

[brigantine1.livejournal.com]

*squirms happily* This is delicious! Ewan trying to be so good, and Eric being so naughty - especially the surprise inside his mouth. Ice not kinky? *snort* I love the last line; just a little thing, but it sums up so neatly.

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *blush* I'm really glad you liked this chapter.

Isn't Ewan yummy when he's trying, but still can't quite stop the snarky attitude? I could just lick him... Please?

[dinalphiel.livejournal.com]

*shivers* Guh, I could practically feel it. Cold, cold, cold and tortured pleasure... Very powerful, thank you!

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*sends Eric over to warm you up*

GLad you enjoyed - thank you so much for the feedback! :)

[bloominbabylon.livejournal.com]

Eric's warm, though

This was the last nail in my coffin...I don't know why...maybe its the simplicity of the statement, yet it conveys so much...it just hit me in the right place at the right time...

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Every now and then, my slutty Ewan has a tender moment. There's a reson this is *Eric*, not just whatever random bloke he ran into at the pub.

Glad you liked - thanks for letting me know!

[bloominbabylon.livejournal.com]

can't believe I'm going to say this (makes me sound like such a poof)...but even in the filthiest, most debauched things I think and or write...there is *something* more to connect the characters than just their bodies...

and I love seeing that in the stories I read:-)

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Hehehehhe! Poof!

Er, um, Girl!

But yeah, me too, completely. :)