FIC: Eros' Altar (Ewan/Eric, NC-17), for [livejournal.com profile] 50kinkyways

Feb. 25th, 2007 08:26 pm
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Title: Eros' Altar
Author: [livejournal.com profile] salixbabylon
Fandom: RPS
Characters: Ewan McGregor/Eric Bana
Prompt: 25. Orgy
Word Count: 440
Rating: NC-17
Author's Notes: Strange things happen in the darkness.


Eros' Altar


There were hands everywhere: grasping, stroking, touching, probing. Holding him down. Keeping him in place when he struggled. Gentle, strong, firm hands. Four, six, eight, more; how many men were there?

He was lost, too overcome with pleasure to think clearly, eyes blindfolded, and why think about it at all? His purpose here was to enjoy, to let go, to surrender to the will of the Others.

Mouths replaced some of the hands, licking, nipping, biting. Teetering on the edge of too much pleasure/pain, but not spilling over. Ewan was being kissed senseless, long drugging kisses that stole his breath and left him gasping in just the way he liked, slightly frantic for air. Bites and licks teased his chest, stomach, thighs, even his ankles. The sound of his moaning reverberated in his head, inside the mouth pressed to his, inside the darkness of the cavern enclosing the altar.

Two mouths fastened onto his nipples, pulling, pinching, and not biting but chewing on his tits. Teeth firm and perfect held his aching flesh and gnawed on it until he screamed with delight.

A brief respite filled with noises of the Others, skin against skin, wet sucking sounds of mouths and lips and tongues, groans, and the moist slide of eager cocks into welcoming mouths and tight asses.

The hands held Ewan firm when he struggled, wanting more, so hard his cock dribbled, a multitude of bite marks throbbing with each heartbeat. Finally a reprieve as some of the mouths came back, lapping at his balls, cruel little kittenish licks to the head of his cock, eagerly cleaning him of the fluid welling out of him.

It was unbearable and he struggled against the frustrating and wonderful torment of it, the many hands and mouths of the temple priests keeping him in place and on edge until they were ready for him to come, until they were satisfied with him, until they decided he was worthy.

He knew he was worthy when the mouth kissing him and stealing his breath pulled away to let him drag much-needed air into his lungs as a ravenous mouth devoured his cock, pulling and sucking and wrenching the toe-curling orgasm out of him. All the hundreds of voices of the Others around him joined with his in a shattering howl of orgiastic ecstasy.

His heartbeats slowed to the sound of a steady thrum. The heat of one body pressed against his, wrists and ankles still restrained.

Ewan slowly opened his eyes.

Eric raised an eyebrow. "Wow. Must have been one hell of a dream," he said, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand.

~end~

Date: 2007-02-26 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] second-banana.livejournal.com
*shiver*

Damn, that's good. I love love love that at the heart of these prompts is always Ewan, Eric, and thier connection to one another.

As a side note, I want that dream. So good!

Date: 2007-02-27 12:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
*blush* Thanks! It's always nice to share a daydream, don't you think? ;)

Eric+Ewan=TRUELUV4EVAH

or something *g*

Date: 2007-02-26 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] molly-millions.livejournal.com
You two must really enjoy making your readers desperate, hungry, fevered & wet beyond words don't you. As soon as I saw the prompt, I knew. DeLICIOUS.

some of the mouths came back, lapping at his balls, cruel little kittenish licks to the head of his cock, eagerly cleaning him of the fluid welling out of him.

*dead*

Date: 2007-02-27 12:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
We do, yes. That's the whole point of it.

*grins proudly*



Date: 2007-02-27 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heartofslash.livejournal.com
Yes, we do.

Date: 2007-02-26 08:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elfscribe5.livejournal.com
Yum! Like that dream.

Date: 2007-02-27 12:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Thanks! I wouldn't mind having it myself... ;)

Date: 2007-02-26 09:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisagems.livejournal.com
wow. how'm I supposed to sleep after reading *that*. vbs.
Just I'll just have to find some way to relax.
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Date: 2007-02-27 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisagems.livejournal.com
I would say you are evil, but since that was exactly what I had planned...

Date: 2007-02-27 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Hehehe! Well, you can refer to prompt #36 if you need some suggestions for how to relax.

Or should I send Eric over for some hands-on assistance?

Date: 2007-02-27 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisagems.livejournal.com
hmmm... the above was *supposed* to be a response to this. silly gmail.

Date: 2007-02-26 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] foxrafer.livejournal.com
Wow. Just ... wow. The heat and hunger in this is palpable.

Date: 2007-02-27 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm so glad that came across to you - Ewan and his out-of-control fantasies. ;)

Date: 2007-02-26 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] astrojen.livejournal.com
One of these days...those two boys are gonna be the death of me. Whew!

Jen ;->

Date: 2007-02-27 12:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Killing us in the way we love best...

Perfect icon for it, too. :)

*smooch*

Date: 2007-02-27 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kialur.livejournal.com
Uhm... this was... inspiering...
*runs off to go to sleep*

Date: 2007-02-28 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Sweet dreams! ;)

Date: 2007-02-28 07:57 am (UTC)
ext_9063: (Vintage boot)
From: [identity profile] mlyn.livejournal.com
So wonderful! Very inspiring. *grin*

Date: 2007-03-01 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Thanks! GLad you liked Ewan's kinky little fantasy. :)

Date: 2007-02-28 08:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lozateazer.livejournal.com
This reminds me of a scene from the book "The Leather Daddy and the Femme."

One of the characters is talking about rooms in the old baths, and he's describing the black orgy rooms, and how it reminded him of ancient Greece.

"Render unto Ceaser that which is Ceaser's." ;)

This was so decadent and so unbelievably hot.

*fans self* Gotta love the idea of uncountable bodies paying attention just to you. And to Ewan! Oooh boy.

Date: 2007-03-01 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
I haven't actually read that book - guess I need to! Sounds hot! :)

Isn't it nice when we all connect on the same wavelength? I know I'd love to be one of the priestesses in the particular cave. *g*

Date: 2007-03-01 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lozateazer.livejournal.com
Veeeeeery good book--Highly recommend. It's by Carol Queen, who's the High Grand Poobah of Sex at Good Vibrations. So you can probably get it there ;) bwahaha.

*just... dies over the fic again*

Date: 2007-02-28 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vamprino.livejournal.com
guuurrrhhh...alcjnakjnca111!!1nfee4874j*^&89!
*ahem*

Sorry about that...Love it! Why can't I have those dreams? *pouts*

Keep up the good work! More, MORE!


Please ^_^

Date: 2007-03-01 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Hehehe! Just close your eyes and concentrate. You're allowed to call it a dream even if you're not asleep. Eric says so. ;)

More coming, hopefully every Monday!

Date: 2010-05-11 01:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fuzzyoverlord39.livejournal.com
Too good for words.

*faints*

Date: 2010-05-14 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad to entertain. :)

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