birthday ficlet

[salixbabylon]

Title: Present
Pairing: Karl/Sean/Viggo/David
Rating: NC-17
Archiving: Please ask.
Disclaimer: No offense meant to the real actor people.
Summary: In honor of helena_s_renn's birthday!


Karl groaned, low and deep, as Sean slid into his arse. His hands clenched as he was penetrated, David's reassuring grip steadying him. He took a breath, adjusting to the thickness of Sean's cock, grateful for the pause to savor it all. Feeling every sensation, from the rug under his knees and elbows, David's hands holding his as their hot breaths mingled, the press of Sean's body against his legs and butt, arsehole stretched full of cock, balls on balls.

David made a similar noise as Viggo pressed into him, completing the mirror-image of the four men. Both tops seemed to be waiting for something, and must have received it when David sighed, a small sound of relaxation laced with hunger.

And then it began: groans and thrusts, guttural moans, four hands clenching taut hips, four holding each other in a sweaty grip. Karl closed his eyes and let it wash over him, everything from the animal sensation of one of the most expert fucks he could remember, coupled with knowing, seeing, hearing Viggo and David doing the same thing.

He couldn't last long with so much stimuli. It was a small thing that pushed Karl over the edge: the barest brush of David's lips against his, a flash of tongue perhaps, a familiar taste in a jungle of excess.

"Happy birthday, Karl," David whispered to his lover. "Hope you liked your present."

Comments

[nverland]

Oh hell.

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

In a good way?

[nverland]

Oh yeah baby. Very good.

[lisagems.livejournal.com]

Where's my water, my mouth is strangely dry. wow. just
wow

[oceansecrets2.livejournal.com]

*guh*

[lozateazer.livejournal.com]

more please? *pant, pant*

[helena-s-renn.livejournal.com]

*dies* the whole 1st paragrah was simply... fjkd;alkdfjs;a!!

if i could only write this pairing/4, the who's doing who would be exactly like that. i keep reading it and every time finding something new to squee over. thank you so much; that was PERFECT!

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Yay! :) Thank you. *snogs*

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*giggles* Glad to have affected you so. ;)

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*smooch*

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm sure they got up to more later on. ;)

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*smooch* Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. And I'm very happy that you'd have arranged the four of them in the same dynamic - I had a fun afternoon imagining different scenarios... although Karl was always a bottom. ;)

Happy belated birthday again! *hug*

[lozateazer.livejournal.com]

But.... I need to hear exactly what!! It is crucial for my survival!

[bijou69.livejournal.com]

I came here directed by helena's post.....

Thank you so much for this...I'm greedy for every Daisy smut I can get.

....when David sighed, a small sound of relaxation laced with hunger.

*sighs too* just perfect!

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Yay! :) Glad you liked it - I think the idea of him with Karl is very swoon-inspiring.

[vamprino.livejournal.com]

And me with a birthday coming up... (fine, so it's in three moths -_-)

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*snort* Well, that's still "coming up" technically. :)

*hug*

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

Wow - that 'mirror image' thing was really something!

Happy un-birthday to me!!!

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Sexy visuals always get me in the mood - and with a 4some, you can get some fun shapes. :)

I'm so glad you liked it too!

[foxrafer.livejournal.com]

Stunningly wonderful; the imagery alone could kill you. So hot.

Would you mind if I added you to my friends list?

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*blush* Thank you! I'm always pleased to share the visions that make me sweat. ;)

Of course not - friend away and I will return the favor!

[luthien-af.livejournal.com]

*faints*

This is so hot! *fans herself*

FINALLY a fic which features Karl bottoming! There are too few fic of that... *pouts*

When I picture these four men together, this is exactly how I'd see it :). Sean/Karl and Viggo/David.

"Happy birthday, Karl," David whispered to his lover. "Hope you liked your present."
Well, if *he* didn't like it, *I* did! ;).

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Hehehe! I think I've written Karl as a bottom a few times - as have a few others like heartofslash. It's fun to make the brawny guys bend over and beg for it. ;)

GLad you liked this - it was fun to write/imagine!

[luthien-af.livejournal.com]

It's fun to make the brawny guys bend over and beg for it. ;)
Hehe, so true :P.

it was fun to write/imagine!
Yeah, it's definitely fun to imagine! ;).