Ficlet: Kinky (1/1)

[salixbabylon]

Title/Prompt: "Kinky" from the 28-fics-meme (30 actually)
Pairing: Orlando/Eric for astrojen
Author: salixbabylon
Rating: R for kink
Word Count: 341
Disclaimer: Complete fiction. I am implying nothing about the real sexual preferences of the actors herein. Absolutely no disrespect is meant to them.



Ropes crossed Eric's wide torso, geometric shapes framing perfectly formed pecs and lats. The aesthetics were lovely; that shibari was also practical was an extra bonus.

He shifted slightly, feeling the ropes bite into his skin, abrading it. Orlando was so good at this: they were tight enough to leave lines, patterns that would last for a few hours. Tight enough to struggle against, even a big man like Eric, and not be able to get free. Not have to hold himself in check.

Alone in the room (but probably observed), he thrashed around. Just for the pleasure of it. The embrace was firm and comforting. Not to mention arousing as hell.

By the time Orlando returned, standing in front of him encased in the midnight leather trousers that Eric knew by smell, Eric would already be flying. Orlando's voice would sound distant, far off, like nothing to be concerned with. Of course Orlando could make him focus, and would.

Eric was never sure if he liked being called back into his body, jarred into it with the pain of nipple clamps, pinches, and slaps. Leaving his dark, dreamy shadow world of peace to come back to this one, even for the pleasure and pain Orlando twisted together for him so expertly.

Of course he liked it, loved it; the high at the end made this anticipatory one feel like nothing in comparison. Still, he appreciated being given these moments to float, to drift, to let go. It was a taste of what was to come, at the end.

After the torment.

Early on, he had spent this time anticipating, waiting to see what would come next. Fretting. Worrying. Working himself into a state, praying for Orlando to come back to him. To not leave him here. Alone. Afraid.

Now, Eric knew he had nothing to fear. Orlando would come back and would do whatever he wanted to Eric's body. It would be exquisite and possibly agonizing.

Cradled in the ropes, Eric knew peace and serenity as he waited. Patient.

Surrendering.

~end~

Comments

[bloominbabylon.livejournal.com]

I think you've turned me into a kinkmonkey.

Of course Orlando could make him focus, and would.

fucking HOT!

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

I think you've turned me into a kinkmonkey

Oh please. I can't take credit for all that. ;)

Glad you liked - it was fun making it hot but not explicit.

[alliwantisanelf.livejournal.com]

This is just beautiful.

The way you use words to bring us into Eric's headspace, let us feel the underlying tension of his anticipation, yet also feel his surrender to the security the ropes provide is just fantastic.

*shiver*

Now I just wanna know what happens when the door opens and he smells those midnight leather pants....

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Thank you! With these 30-min-ficlets, I'm more pleased with some than others and I'm glad you liked this one. I'm happy with how it turned out, and so very pleased that it conveyed the tone I was going for.

I'm sure Orlando's leather will end up tongue-bathed at some point, in particular areas, don't you think? ;)

[bitofaspaz.livejournal.com]

I liked this one. Some very insightful perspective. The inherent security of being bound and having choice taken away from you holds a sort of serenity.

Miss you and I have a gazillion people who are dying to meet you.

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Too bad your patients aren't more serene when they're all bound, huh? ;)

*smooch* Miss you too.

[telesilla.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm...very nice. For me, one of the big things about bdsm is trust and so I love the difference between what he felt when they first started and what he feels now; I love the trust that it shows.

And thank you for writing Orli as the top; more people need to do this.

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It's funny what comes out when I'm just writing these ficlets in the 30 minutes I'm trying to stick to. Trust wasn't something I was thinking of, per se, but it's defintiely a critical element to that kind of mental surrender.

Orli as a top = I figure if I can do it, so can he. ;)

(Dunno if you've read it, but lostiawen wrote the first dominant Orli I ever came across, in Boundaries (http://www.livejournal.com/tools/memories.bml?user=lostiawen&keyword=Boundaries+Index&filter=all).)

[orli-gasm.livejournal.com]

Gawd! The things you do to my head! LOL!

This is so wonderful and sexy and hot... I love the thoughts running through Eric's head. He slight fear, his complete trust and his love and desire!

Damn this is just wonderful!

I also love that whole ...encased in the midnight leather trousers that Eric knew by smell...

*whimper*

THANK YOU!!!!

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*washes out your head* There, all clean again. :)

And *blush* I'm glad you liked this one so much, that so much came through from Eric's headspace. *smooch*

[second-banana.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

This is just so beautiful. I love the way you describe that floaty space. The fact that Orlando keeps giving Eric those moments even though (and possibly because) Eric isn't scared anymore just makes my heart melt. What an amazing thing to do for a person.

~Susan

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Interesting what comes out for different people - I never even thought about if from Orlando's POV, why he kept giving Eric so much time. But you're right - that's very sweet of him. He's such a good top, my ideal-dom-Orli. ;)

[lozateazer.livejournal.com]

Gods, that image... Eric like that, it's just so breathtaking. I especially love the description of shibari. Thanks to you, shibari is one of my biggest kinks, and I felt so sinfully delicious picturing Eric like that... I can't even say anything. Though would you mind asking Orlando if I could play with his Eric?

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Thanks to me?! How'd that happen? *blush*

I do love to render you speechless. :)

I suspect that Orli, like most doms, is fairly possessive of his sub. And if *I* had Eric all tied up like that, I doubt I'd be in the mood to share, either - would you? ;)

[lozateazer.livejournal.com]

That damn Vigorli you wrote... I think that was the first time I came across shibari, and ooooh boy, Mommah likees.

And no, I wouldn't want to share... Unless they asked very nicely and I was there and... *wanders off into fantasy-land*

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

I'm normally wary of anything with "Kink" in the title, but this was quite gentle.

Glad Eric got over his insecurities . . . everything comes to he who waits!!

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Sweet! Thank you for trying out something beyond your comfort zone - I'm glad you trusted that it wouldn't be too much for you to handle.

Being patient is something Eric is much better at than I am - if I were waiting for Orlando in leather, I'd either be a big puddle of goo or a twitching mess. ;)

[lisagems.livejournal.com]

nngguhh! *shivers* Happy first day of summer, and did you have a good solstice or what.

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*warms you up*

Thank you! Had a weird Midsummer Night's Eve, and am hoping to have a little celebration tonight to get ready for the second half of the year. What about you?

[lisagems.livejournal.com]

*snuggles into warm and sigh* Good story.

Did laundry. I suppose that could qualify as a cleansing. A much needed cleansing. sigh.

Trying to get some friends together for something tonight, but may end up solitary. Solitary by Lake Michigan isn't so bad, tho.

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Sounds really nice, actually. Very low-key.

My coven did a small thing, letting go of the things that hold you back. Our focus was on the Hero's Quest aspect of starting the 2nd part of the year, so we made crowns and had a drink from the "holy grail." It was fun - I never think to do things like that on my own. I'm so in awe of solitaries. :)

[lisagems.livejournal.com]

I didn't do much. Just a short walk by the water and a bit of pondering. Much change in the world.

[astrojen.livejournal.com]

Oh yes...that hit the spot. You captured it so perfectly. And what a surprise that it was Eric bottoming! Loved it. :)

Jen ;->

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

*smooch* I'm so glad you liked it - my Eric!muse is such a bottom. Once he can find someone to relax with, he surrenders himself 100%. Man, I'd kill to have a sub like that. ;)

[astrojen.livejournal.com]

Who wouldn?t?

Greetings from Spain btw...the hotel has net access. Yippee!

Jen ;->