If you wouldn't mind, I'd be most grateful! It's been about 3 years since I wrote in that fandom and I'm extra-nervous, despite it being a silly little smutbomb. And she can't beta since it's *her* gift, the silly girl. :)
And she can't beta since it's *her* gift, the silly girl. :)
Before you even said that I'd figured it out and was snickering *sporfle*
Sure, send it on! It'll be fun to have a look at it. Just let me know if there's anything you specifically want me to look at (like, if you want another opinion on the dialogue and/or characterization, or whether the placement of body parts and general visualization is clear, or how the grammar checks out, or the structure of the piece, etc - you get the idea). I tend to be an all-around beta, but I've found the sometimes people know that they only want certain aspects looked and that they don't want others tampered with ;) I'm like that myself: if I send something to a beta, it's only for a polish, not a major rewrite. So let me know what you want!
I should be able to get it back to you within a day or two :)
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Date: 2006-06-01 03:48 am (UTC)*batts eyes at you prettily*
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Date: 2006-06-01 05:49 am (UTC)Before you even said that I'd figured it out and was snickering *sporfle*
Sure, send it on! It'll be fun to have a look at it. Just let me know if there's anything you specifically want me to look at (like, if you want another opinion on the dialogue and/or characterization, or whether the placement of body parts and general visualization is clear, or how the grammar checks out, or the structure of the piece, etc - you get the idea). I tend to be an all-around beta, but I've found the sometimes people know that they only want certain aspects looked and that they don't want others tampered with ;) I'm like that myself: if I send something to a beta, it's only for a polish, not a major rewrite. So let me know what you want!
I should be able to get it back to you within a day or two :)
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Date: 2006-06-01 05:05 am (UTC)*scratches head*
Is liking kink a *weak* spot? ;)
Thank you for the offer - if MH is too busy, I'll hit you up.
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Date: 2006-06-01 05:34 am (UTC)I dunno which mail you've got for me, though. Just use misspince @ livejournal.com - that'll get to the correct place.
Well, liking kink can be a weak spot... in certain... situations. Er. Or if you're very drunk and playing "I've never..."
In any case, hit me up at your leisure :)
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Date: 2006-06-02 01:24 am (UTC)