FIC: Balance (EM/EB, R), for [livejournal.com profile] 50kinkyways

Feb. 11th, 2007 08:46 pm
salixbabylon: (kinkfEEst)
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Title: Balance
Author: [livejournal.com profile] salixbabylon
Fandom: RPS
Characters: Ewan McGregor/Eric Bana
Prompt: 16. Vibrators
Word Count: 452
Rating: R
Author's Notes: Life is easier than Ewan thinks.


Balance


Everything seemed normal. And God knew Ewan had been accused of over-thinking things once or twice. Could life really be that easy? One moment they're having a scene and Ewan's freaking out because Eric's too into it, and the next moment, well, he's getting pissed on and loving it.

Maybe not loving the piss per se, but loving the feeling of letting Eric do whatever the fuck he wants to him. Eric's not going to hurt him. Urine's not going to hurt him. It feels bad, though, horribly naughty. Which is always the sort of thing that arouses Ewan beyond belief. And it did – he's not sure why and he's not even sure he wants to think about why, but being pissed on by Eric after their argument/fight/whatever really fucking turned him on.

And he especially loved that he fucked Eric afterward. Ewan got pissed on but then he was the one doing the fucking – it wasn't at all degrading or humiliating, like it could have been. It was just dirty. And it was brilliant.

Eric had a way of making things that you weren't supposed to do really hot. Of challenging Ewan, daring him, bloody well taunting him, even...

Ewan supposed that was part of what made Eric so irresistible.

Sure, things got a little confusing sometimes, especially since they switched. Ewan had never switched mid-scene before, though, and that had seemed like it was going to be a disaster, but then it wasn't.

And it wasn't even a full switch really. Eric hadn't topped, and he hadn't really even dom'd. He'd pissed on Ewan, but Ewan had told him to do it.

Yeah. Definitely over-thinking it.

Time to pull back a little bit, Ewan thought, looking at Eric kneeling on the floor next to the bed. Ewan was tired of it all and just wanted to sub for a while.

He turned off the vibrator he had been leisurely stroking around his arse.

"Trade places," he said. "You do it."

"What?" Eric asked, confused but climbing onto the bed.

"You wanted to play with the vibrator – you do it. I'll just lie here," Ewan said, spreading out across the bed like a sacrificial victim.

Eric picked up the toy and gave Ewan a look. "No moving."

Ewan grinned, wrapping his hands around the bed posts. "All right."

An eyebrow raised and the rounded tip dug into his balls with just a little too much pressure.

Ewan grinned even more. "All right, Sir."

Eric licked his lips and trailed the toy down to Ewan's hole, letting the sensations tease him. "I told you it wouldn't make me a bottom."

Apparently it really was just that simple. Ewan relaxed and stopped thinking.

~end~

Date: 2007-02-12 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bitofaspaz.livejournal.com
I liked this follow up from the last piece. I like how you really nicely tied up all the residual tension from the last piece and left the boys back in a good space. A very good space. ;) And you know what else? I've never read such a good explanation of what it's like to want to sub as that one line.. "Ewan was tired of it all and just wanted to sub for a while." Tres bien mon amie. *smooch*

Date: 2007-02-12 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
*blush* Thank you! Well, we had to get them out of all the heavy stuff somehow - I'm glad it worked.

And totally - sometimes I think subs are just lazy. *kneels* I'm feeling a little lazy myself lately. ;)

Date: 2007-02-12 06:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illuminated-sin.livejournal.com
Sounds about right.

And all is well in their universe. :)

Quite the fitting title. ::nodnod::

Well done. ;)

Date: 2007-02-12 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
*beams* Thank you! I'm so pleased that you liked the resolution of that sequence.

And it just goes to prove that sometimes *not* thinking is the best solution. ;)

Date: 2007-02-12 05:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illuminated-sin.livejournal.com
Absolutely! Gotta know when to kick back and let someone else drive, my dear. ;)

Date: 2007-02-12 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] foxrafer.livejournal.com
This follows so well from the last fic, with Ewan still working through what he thinks of all of this and Eric just going with the flow. I like this a lot.

Date: 2007-02-12 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Thank you! It's nice to make Ewan freak out and have Eric be the calm, reasonable one. I'm glad that dynamic was believable for you too. :)

Date: 2007-02-12 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heartofslash.livejournal.com
I just love this. Yeah. Definitely over-thinking it.Thank the Goddess Ewan has finally decided to relax and embrace his inner kink.

Now it's my turn again...*leers*

Date: 2007-02-12 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
*snogs* Ewan's learning to let go...

Oh, is that the phone ringing? ;)

Date: 2007-02-13 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] molly-millions.livejournal.com
"It feels bad, though, horribly naughty. Which is always the sort of thing that arouses Ewan beyond belief. "

*growl*

As the others mentioned, I really liked the resolution too. I rather enjoy them switching places like that. And "Sir" was a nice touch. Thanks to HH I get a little hard-on every time I hear or see "sir". *smacks lips*

Date: 2007-02-13 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad the way it worked out between them has met with such a positive reaction. and I always have fun when Ewan ambraces being dirty. ;)

We should submit a request to Ewan's agent that his next movie include him saying "sir" a lot. *melts*

Date: 2007-02-14 07:58 am (UTC)
ext_9063: (Crotchetorial region)
From: [identity profile] mlyn.livejournal.com
Mmm. Can I just have them in my bedroom? I'll set up a futon in the corner.

Date: 2007-02-14 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salixbabylon.livejournal.com
Hehehe! Only if you videotape it for the rest of us, too. ;)

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